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Help me understand good patriot. I was getting all set to help you by proposing minor corrections, but then I skimmed Part 1 and don't get anything. There's nothing to correct if I don't understand anything or see anything that helps advance the story, let alone anything huge. It looks like you seized on the point that a Japanese restaurant storefront now has the name City-State Hotel (very slight in confirmation level), then you rounded its coordinates to the nearest minute to get a nearby park (no confirmation), then you researched the structure of the park to find things that seem to confirm a storyline such as it having a children's playground (no confirmation) and a Tree of Life (very slight hint). Is that inaccurate? Wouldn't it be nice if Part 1 actually told us why this park should be charged with hosting heinous crimes besides its map view data? The Vatican snake room has better apophenia than this, frankly. I know that's a lot of cold water on it but you can make this huge if you take up the duty of ELI5. Otherwise, as you hint, Jesus remains the one with the words of eternal life. EDIT: You have also done us a good turn in pointing up the quote "Never retreat from the battlefield [Twitter, FB, etc.]". Yet, if that view is valid, why should the argument "avoid them to slightly demonetize them" trump the argument "engage them to soundly defeat them"? So many here seem to think avoidance is the way.

3 years ago
1 score
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Help me understand good patriot. I was getting all set to help you by proposing minor corrections, but then I skimmed Part 1 and don't get anything. There's nothing to correct if I don't understand anything or see anything that helps advance the story, let alone anything huge.

It looks like you seized on the point that a Japanese restaurant storefront now has the name City-State Hotel (very slight in confirmation level), then you rounded its coordinates to the nearest minute to get a nearby park (no confirmation), then you researched the structure of the park to find things that seem to confirm a storyline such as it having a children's playground (no confirmation) and a Tree of Life (very slight hint). Is that inaccurate?

Wouldn't it be nice if Part 1 actually told us why this park should be charged with hosting heinous crimes besides its map view data? The Vatican snake room has better apophenia than this, frankly. I know that's a lot of cold water on it but you can make this huge if you take up the duty of ELI5. Otherwise, as you hint, Jesus remains the one with the words of eternal life.

3 years ago
1 score