Thank you for replying with constructive criticism.

The first part shed the ground with dread, I wasn't going for the discarding definition, but more like blood shed, drip by drip.(Like shed the ground with blood).

The dread (terror, fear) dripping on the soil, making it a bad aspect. The contrast is that it made a crown of victory through it all.

The second part dark chasms of despair it has continuity to the dread soaked soil in that it is a large rift that people are stuck in between two ominous jagged cliffs each side with only a narrow path that we can walk upon, yet we still made it, contrastedin the next two lines.

The next point, you're right in that one Son should be capitalised, I'll change it.

And finally to the grammar, I trust the autotype to do my grammar for me. I never write the apostrophe's. I've put my poems on a website that has its own text input that doesn't correct the mistakes and I've copied and pasted it from there.

I'm not too bothered by my grammar mistakes.

Thank you for replying with constructive criticism.

The first part shed the ground with dread, I wasn't going for the discarding definition, but more like blood shed, drip by drip.The dread (terror, fear) dripping on the soil, making it a bad aspect. The contrast is that it made a crown of victory through it all.

The second part dark chasms of despair it has continuity to the dread soaked soil in that it is a large rift that people are stuck in between two ominous jagged cliffs each side with only a narrow path that we can walk upon, yet we still made it, contrastedin the next two lines.

The next point, you're right in that one Son should be capitalised, I'll change it.

And finally to the grammar, I trust the autotype to do my grammar for me. I never write the apostrophe's. I've put my poems on a website that has its own text input that doesn't correct the mistakes and I've copied and pasted it from there.

I'm not too bothered by my grammar mistakes.

Thank you for replying with constructive criticism.

The first part shed the ground with dread, I wasn't going for the discarding definition, but more like blood shed, drip by drip.The dread (terror, fear) dripping on the soil, making it a bad aspect. The contrast is that it made a crown of victory through it all.

The second part dark chasms of despair it has continuity to the dread soaked soil in that it is a large rift that people are stuck in between two ominous jagged cliffs each side with only a narrow path that we can walk upon, yet in contrast we still made it, the next two lines.

The next point, you're right in that one Son should be capitalised, I'll change it.

And finally to the grammar, I trust the autotype to do my grammar for me. I never write the apostrophe's. I've put my poems on a website that has its own text input that doesn't correct the mistakes and I've copied and pasted it from there.

I'm not too bothered by my grammar mistakes.