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I think the problem you are having, what I was "wrong" about, is my first sentence:

The 14th amendment makes the statement that anyone born within the borders of the country are members of the Governmental Corporation called the United States Government

Let me fix it so you can move forward and get to the point:

The 14th amendment makes the statement that anyone born within the borders of the country and subject to the jurisdiction thereof, are members of the Governmental Corporation called the United States Government.

Is that better? The point of clarification is irrelevant to what I was saying. It was implicit within my original statement, since it was within the quote directly above the sentence. That I didn't include the addendum was simply to save time.

I even said at the end that the "jurisdiction" part was important, but that I wasn't going to get into it at that time. It goes beyond what you are saying, which I agree with.

2 years ago
1 score
Reason: Original

I think the problem you are having, what I was "wrong" about, is my first sentence:

The 14th amendment makes the statement that anyone born within the borders of the country are members of the Governmental Corporation called the United States Government

Let me fix it so you can move forward and get to the point:

The 14th amendment makes the statement that anyone born within the borders of the country and subject to the jurisdiction thereof, are members of the Governmental Corporation called the United States Government.

Is that better? The point of clarification is irrelevant to what I was saying. It was implicit within my original statement, since it was within the quote directly above the sentence. That I didn't include the addendum was simply to save time.

2 years ago
1 score