Reason: Fixed a typo, and some grammar... LOL!
Once upon a time, not so very long ago, a naked boy jumped out of one of those very same palaces upper windows, in order to escape the vile tortures within - it was caught on video, along with some female laughter, but it should have been met with cries of anguish... and then shouts of rage!
99 days ago
1 score
Reason: Original
One upon a time,not so very long ago, a naked boy jumped out of one of those very same palaces upper windows, in order to escape the vile tortures within - it was caught on video, along with some female laughter, but it should have been met with cries of anguish... and then shouts of rage!
99 days ago
1 score