Yes, I suck at brevity. To be honest I feel like this is brevity but what we have today are people with the attention span of less than a goldfish. I mean there's books about this topic, I condensed it to a paragraph. Lol. But you're right, it is wordy for the level of intellect out there in the country right now.
Well, when you consider that the MSM writes their fake news stories for a 5th grade education, you can understand the people you're trying to reach. Certainly not the folks here on GAW but people in general.
All true.... but wordy. Since brevity is the soul of wit, maybe you can pare down the words to the fundamentals.
Yes, I suck at brevity. To be honest I feel like this is brevity but what we have today are people with the attention span of less than a goldfish. I mean there's books about this topic, I condensed it to a paragraph. Lol. But you're right, it is wordy for the level of intellect out there in the country right now.
Well, when you consider that the MSM writes their fake news stories for a 5th grade education, you can understand the people you're trying to reach. Certainly not the folks here on GAW but people in general.