My contribution to the next campfire sing-a-long
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I think the whole “go through” issue is a you problem.
I think a comma certainly would have helped you, but for anyone else seeing the fact that “will go” rhymes with “dildo” makes the version much easier, cleaner, smoother, and better. Your version is clunky and awkward