This is a stretch from the beginning, going from CO-V-FE-FE "Cobalt Vanadium Iron Iron" to "Iron Cobalt Vanadium Alloy" for no discernable reason. Even the linear formula is listed as either "FeCoV" or "CoFeV", so why use a different one? Why re-order the elements and why have iron there twice? Iron makes up 49% of the alloy just like Cobalt does, so it's not like it's there as an indicator of an increased incidence of iron.

Then there's the business with the "two oxygen atoms" of water which continues to give me doubt of the author's ability to read or understand chemical formulas... Not to mention how much of a stretch everything else seems to be.

Are we just posting fanfiction now?