The song's a little slow, but I dig the dark feel. Kinda grungy. I'd say to make the "where we go one we go all" part into a chorus or a hook where you can really pull out the stops, speed it up a bit, and bring it back down for the next verse. Think the chorus of Jeremy by Pearl Jam or even Would by Alice in Chains.
The song's a little slow, but I dig the dark feel. Kinda grungy. I'd say to make the "where we go one we go all" part into a chorus or a hook where you can really pull out the stops, speed it up a bit, and bring it back down for the next verse. Think the chorus of Jeremy by Pearl Jam or even Would by Alice in Chains.
Overall, I dig it. Keep up the good work.
I think you are on to something! Thanks!