The word placement is fine. It being fucked up makes them pause an extra moment to read it and then think about the placement being wrong for even longer after.
Instead of a 10 seconds of their time to read it, think about it just a moment, and then move on, you put the message in their head for the next 10 minutes of their life.
The word placement is fine. It being fucked up makes them pause an extra moment to read it and then think about the placement being wrong for even longer after.
Instead of a 10 seconds of their time to read it, think about it just a moment, and then move on, you put the message in their head for the next 10 minutes of their life.
^^exactly