Pretty good job on this Ministry School assignment of "integrating quotes into one's propaganda."
I've seen worse work from most journalists.
However the article lacks any real coherent narrative and serves mostly as a tree upon which to hang ornamental quotes. In the future, remember one's job in The Ministry is to provide readership not only talking points, but direction. A mor suspicious reviewer of your work might suspect you entertain sympathies for the enemy. We will be watching.
Mr. Gilbert
Pretty good job on this Ministry School assignment of "integrating quotes into one's propaganda."
I've seen worse work from most journalists.
However the article lacks any real coherent narrative and serves mostly as a tree upon which to hang ornamental quotes. In the future, remember one's job in The Ministry is to provide readership not only talking points, but direction. A mor suspicious reviewer of your work might suspect you entertain sympathies for the enemy. We will be watching.
Sincerely, Ministerial Review Board