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Dear Senator, I am writing to express my concerns about the recent legislation aimed at banning TikTok. While I agree that action should be taken to address how TikTok's algorithm impacts our children, the rushed decision to ban it raises broader issues. This legislation risks punishing U.S. citizens with severe penalties, including loss of access to information and disproportionate prison sentences for accessing banned sites or apps.

The vague terms allowing the President to ban any site or app could lead to widespread censorship, as seen with Covid vaccine and Hunter Biden Laptop narratives. It appears that TikTok is being targeted due to its independence from collusion with Big Tech platforms for censorship. This move could set a precedent for controlling other platforms that resist such censorship. I urge you to reconsider supporting this legislation, as it threatens fundamental freedoms and sets a dangerous precedent for online censorship. Your vote on this matter will influence my decision in the next election. Thank you for your attention to this important issue. Sincerely, [Your Name]