Burning Bright is a good guy who's very smart and produces some good analyses. HOWEVER, he does need to realize that writing internet articles (and books) for the general public is very different than writing scholarly works, and that his excessively-wordy, "highfalutin" language is alienating his audience (including those who have "read for a living" and those who spent years regularly - and adeptly - wading through such writing) and, instead, write for the "average reader" (who has very little time to read and even less time to attempt to digest long, complex material and who, it has been estimated, reads at a 5th grade level).
Ditto.
Burning Bright is a good guy who's very smart and produces some good analyses. HOWEVER, he does need to realize that writing internet articles (and books) for the general public is very different than writing scholarly works, and that his excessively-wordy, "highfalutin" language is alienating his audience (including those who have "read for a living" and those who spent years regularly - and adeptly - wading through such writing) and, instead, write for the "average reader" (who has very little time to read and even less time to attempt to digest long, complex material and who, it has been estimated, reads at a 5th grade level).
Perhaps this would help: "The Day You Became A Better Writer" by Scott Adams - https://sorfis.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/09/Writing-Tips-Scott-Adams-DFW-Sowin-compilation-Zweig.pdf
:-)