My contribution to the next campfire sing-a-long
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If a person can get pregnant, she's a gal. If a person can get pregnant, she's a gal. Tho' the Left would have us locked up, when we say men can't get knocked up, if a person can get pregnant she's a gal.
If a woman chops her boobs off, she's a gal. If a woman chops her boobs off, she's a gal. If her chromosomes are X's, science tells us what her sex is. If a woman chops her boobs off, she's a gal.
If a woman pisses standing, she's a gal. If a woman pisses standing she's a gal. Even if her urine will go through a fleshy sort of dildo, if a woman pisses standing she's a gal.
I’d rather my kids learn these songs than CRT. Anyone else?
Nice 2 nd verse.. lol
Should change "urine" to "pee" in the last verse.
Fits better.
Meter is as important as rhyme. I needed a two syllable word to fit the melody.
I know.
I think the meter is off using "urine".
Count the syllables.
No the meter is right in the current version.
E-ven if the ur-ine will go (8) Through a flesh-y sort of dil-do (8)
But the comma should come after through (even though you didn't add it like you did in the other verses).
"Even if her urine will go through,
a fleshy sort of dildo"
vs
"Even if her pee will go through,
A fleshy sort of dildo"
Just seems to flow better
Through doesn’t rhyme with dildo in this version. The ends of the lines need to rhyme.
Meter wise it also doesn’t work at all
In the original, “will go” rhymes with “dildo”
Sure, on paper it seems correct, but the brain is trained to say the phrase "go through" as two words meant to be said together, without giving pause between them.
By requiring that pause, and splitting them up into two different lines in the song, it seems more forced.
Hence, my thought it seemed to flow better.
scrap the third verse, it doesn't work and is distracting. The first two are great!
Everyone's a critic!
I did not know the win was the place to find song writers
Thank you. Showed the original to my hubby and he said there needed to be one for a woman!
TAKE ME DOWN TO TRANSGENDER CITY
WHERE THE GIRLS HAVE DICKS
AND THE BOYS HAVE TITTIES
PLEASE, TAKE ME HOME, WOAOO OH
I will never think of G&R the same.?
Paradise City = LA Transgender City = LA
Bill Cosby voice: "Ya see kids, its the same shit, but a different name. Haugh haugh haugh"
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Ya see, ya got the blue jello or the red jello, little fella. What do you like to play?
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ikr! Nothing to say except that is Funny as hell ????
Touche
Fire
This need to be prime-time television. Made me think of like a classic SNL skit or something.
This is gold because it’s TRUE.
Leftist ideology can’t humor because its evil.
Brilliant
HA ha ha . W ell done and rhymes great Connie
Funny how the tune just pops up with the words. Good job.
Insanely brilliant
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You could call it "The Bruce/Caitlin TransJenner Tribute Song". These people are SO, SO, SO misguided. They really are mocking God...thinking they know better...very sad.
Lel that's pretty clever
nice, but maybe I can reccommend a few as well? (sorry, couldn't find them on his bitchute)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ovNgXSQzmY8
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VjHjJA7XmUk